Friday, June 8, 2012

Ordinary...






















Ordinary faced kid
As every child is special
I too look cute.

16 comments:

  1. True, every child is special!!
    I could count 16 syllables here?, sorry if I am wrong..

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    1. Less than seventeen is fine Jaideep....but here these are seventeen..

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    2. Like they say, looks don't matter :) purity of thought and heart is the most essential character that is needed.

      I count 18 syllables..

      Or-di-na-ry faced kid
      As eve-ry child is spe-cial
      I al-so look cute

      It can be remedied by changing the "also" to "too". :)

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  2. light-hearted with a great message.....cute photo, too

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  3. Children fill the life with such innocence no matter who ever they are... they can be naughty chirpy sober or whatsoever but definitely not ordinary... every child is the apple of eyes for their parents :):):)

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  4. This is your first Haiku if I am not wrong. BTW, Leo can explain and judge this better but I loved the thought behind it.

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  5. Very beautiful haiku....with sweet message!

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  6. Children, tender innocent and beautiful always.

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  7. Aww so cute <3
    We should never lose a kid in us <3

    love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  8. Yes, every child is special in his/her own sweet way :-)

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  9. Few words! So meaningful!! A Sukta or call haiku or whatever!!
    (A lesson for parents and teachers: Never Compare)

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