Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Wanting...



Its wanting or greed
Why I am still in prison
Of your thoughts
Even you had let me freed
                    
You will never gonna speak
That you want me back
But you don’t know that
These thoughts letting me weak

I wanna come out
I want to detach now
But something had
Bounded me near about

At least you could have told
The way you feel
I wanna know about
The wanting still unfold.


12 comments:

  1. "I wanna come out
    I want to detach now
    But something had
    Bounded me near about"

    Brilliant lines!

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  2. It was almost like you wanted to say so much but these words weren't enough to contain the emotions.
    Nicely done :)

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  3. Ruchi,

    Read 4 poems now. MAIN AUR WOH is penned so beautifully. It is a fact that animals give so much of love without any expectations. If one moves on for whatever reasons be, it is better to share that with partner one is leaving behind.

    Take care

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  4. Superb thoughts and words....looking for more :-)

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  5. At least you could have told
    The way you feel
    I wanna know about
    The wanting still unfold.

    The desire to know...........
    Beautiful poem.

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  6. Ruchi you are getting better day by day!

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