Nice poem but should be either 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 to be a Haiku.
Cool picture, words too true, a balloon and a cactus, you're right it's an impossible love!
SweetTalkingGuy , thankssCassiopeia Rises, sure, i will try, thankss for your valuable suggestion.
Ruchi...beautiful thoughts...i wish to think aloud, opposite poles attract...the balloon and the cactus can never be near each other...will love be possible?
This is unique!:)
Just like a Punch and Judy show!! Ruchi you have to count in syllables the three lines, details are on the Haiku Heights page.
Some of the seemingly impossible loves make the strongest ... although not common!
Impossible love still holds the heart...the image perfect for you poem..
Impossible indeed. Oh those thorns would hurt.
@Cassiopeia RisesYa sure, this is my first attempt to Haiku,, will learn it..Thnkss..
@AmityLove is Far apart from touch,, its and eternal feeling, so natural and so true..
@Tarang SinhaThnkss Tarang...
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@NankaThankss Mam , will learn it..
@Susie ClevengerYes , true, many thanks
sweet but true...