Friday, October 28, 2011

Power...





I felt betrayed 
And was left alone 
In the darkness of
This glittering world

I was scared
And lost myself
Searching the answer of 
This bizarre life's puzzle

Now, I need something
Something that is called power 
Power to free myself
Power to ponder

Power to breathe strong
Power to move ahead
And the most important
Power to bring back me in myself.





23 comments:

  1. Powerful and positive piece of writing!:)

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  2. Much power in the write and hope you succeed!!

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  3. Very nice.
    I liked your lovely poem.
    Ruchi,if you like Hindi blogs,
    pl.visit mine also,

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  4. The last line says it all. A well-written, empowering poem!

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  5. i really like your poem, it reflects your optimism

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  6. Awesome work in few words. Last paragraph is beautiful.

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  7. Hi Ruchi,
    amazing & powerful post .rocking one
    words & theme perfectly put together.
    Although it was pretty balmy on Sunday - made even better by ur post.
    niceone.

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  8. This poem touches me so much...My girls are going through a rough period in their lives...this speaks for them

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  9. Thats amazing. "The Me in myself" is the most difficult to find. I am in its search too. So I guess we are on the same trail. :)

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  10. A power packed expression! Very well written...

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  11. Powerful words. Building a perfect aura of the theme.
    Loved it!

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  12. Power to breathe strong
    Power to move ahead
    And the most important
    Power to bring back me in myself.
    nice and amazing
    rachana

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  13. And the most important
    Power to bring back me in myself.

    ....very beautiful and effective expression..

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  14. Hello.
    Powerful poem
    The imagery works too.
    I especially liked your ending.

    Nicely done!
    Thanks for sharing & for your visit. I appreciate it.

    The Beautiful Winds Of India

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  15. Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and for your lovely comment.
    I appreciate for your wonderful poem. Very beautifully written.

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  16. the picture shows the power, take a deep breath, and live, powerful poem here

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  17. love the poem.. have a wonderful day!

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  18. may the power be yours ..
    Nice post !!

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  19. Glad that you find power in the end.
    :)

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