Monday, October 17, 2011

Vibrant...



















Kindling yellow sphere
Roaming between dawn and dusk
Dancer so vibrant.

12 comments:

  1. I like this very much. Sinewy and spare.

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  2. Nice one. The lightness of this haiku brings tears of joy in my eyes. Thank you so much.

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  3. yes, a vibrant dancer indeed, the sun. i like the idea. :)

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  4. Such a lovely haiku. Enjoyed reading!

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  5. The sky is a perfect dance floor--I like this one :)

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  6. the sun does dance at that particular time
    of day. great haiku.

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  7. Wonderful Haiku. Beautiful words fit Haiku.



    Melanie

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  8. Lovely!...and you say that you are new to Haiku? I love the idea of Sun being a dancer.

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  9. sun dancing is a great line,
    well done,

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