I so agree with that last line. nice one.
Sounds like a magic sponge!Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could simply squeeze hatred out?Well said!
well said :)
Squeezing out hatred is a worthwhile enterprise.Sponging up the river
sponges have a lot of voids to fill. interesting conceptmy try at a spong senryu http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/28/drooling-dog-senryu/
Nice! I love your last line, very poignant. Sounds simple, but it's actually very deep in meaning. Great work. Thanks for stopping by to mine too :)
love this, apt piece.http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/11/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.htmlsubmit a Haiku or a free verse to poets rally today, have fun making poetic friends, while enjoying exposing your talent to wider audiences.cheers.love your charming poetry here, keep it up.Hope to see you share.xoxox