Sunday, October 23, 2011

Sponge...




                                       Happy life's Sponge
                                       Filled voids with Blessings and Prayers
                                       Squeezed hatred out.




8 comments:

  1. I so agree with that last line. nice one.

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  2. Sounds like a magic sponge!

    Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could simply squeeze hatred out?

    Well said!

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  3. sponges have a lot of voids to fill. interesting concept

    my try at a spong senryu http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/28/drooling-dog-senryu/

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  4. Nice! I love your last line, very poignant. Sounds simple, but it's actually very deep in meaning. Great work. Thanks for stopping by to mine too :)

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  5. love this,
    apt piece.

    http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/11/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html

    submit a Haiku or a free verse to poets rally today, have fun making poetic friends, while enjoying exposing your talent to wider audiences.

    cheers.

    love your charming poetry here, keep it up.


    Hope to see you share.

    xoxox

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