Monday, December 31, 2012

Reality...

He said, she denied
He was empty, she was regretful
He was begging, she was praying
He was tearful, she was crying

He was before, she was after
He was hoping, she was mourning
He couldn't stop, she couldn't move
He was mad, she was sad

He wants to watch, she wants to hide
Everything in LOVE
Which is neither a dream
Nor a reality.


 

23 comments:

  1. really an interesting verse....both sides...the last three lines really make this for me....ha, it is neither...

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  2. Thanks for visiting my piece 'Oddments' written for The Sunday Whirl Wordle word list.

    The last stanza does sum up love and life.
    Continue learning to make your reality the best it can be.

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  3. This is great. It makes me think of the feeling of being disconnected.

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  4. Hi, Thanks for visiting my blog. Please visit anytime. I enjoyed your poem--but it didn't make me think of LOVE... There are differences in all of us --and when in a relationship, YES--there will be differences, but not that many.... Not sure that is a relationship which will work....

    Happy 2013.
    Hugs,
    Betsy

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  5. What a range of emotions. I enjoyed the dichotomy of his and her feelings.

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  6. Love explained in few words! Nice one Ruchi :)

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  7. Excellent work here.
    Last two lines makes me think about LOVE.

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  8. neither a dream nor reality - perfect:)

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  9. Nice sense of conflict here. Enjoyed reading this.

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  10. I felt the pull of warring emotions as I read this. Well done.

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  11. The He and She versions were interesting & contrasting of reality ~ Good one ~

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  12. So much emotion in your poem - I guess that's reality!

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  13. love the way you've played with words here ...
    tc and have a nice day

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  14. very interesting way of writing...makes the reader stress on every line and read it more than once...good piece!

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  15. A nice way to leave the year 2012:) Beautiful words! Happy new year:)

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  16. Very well done. Very well.

    Have a terrific day and a happy new year filled with good health, much happiness and tons of prosperity. :)

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  17. Ruchi,

    Read 2 poems now. Both show little dark side of love. Hope it is just creation of mind.

    Take care

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  18. Loved the rhyming and cute one i say :)

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  19. This is the third poem of yours I have gone through at the trot.
    I like this specially. The ask in the end - it is different to each. But perhaps it is an illusion?

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  20. the opposite party will always play different roles.
    powerful thinking.

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