I was falling
for you
Was waiting
to elite
Amidst the
good and bad
Between the Crest
and trough
Yet you wasn’t
sure
Don’t know,
why
But, At that
point
I don’t wanna lose you
I beg for
something
That something
called love
You were rich
with that
But surely
was insecure.
Last paragraph is brilliant. Lovely poem Ruchi!
ReplyDeleteI like the photo you chose to represent this. Nice combination of words and image.
ReplyDeleteA deep and emotional write.
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ReplyDeleteBoyd are sort of slow with this sort of thing. Your Ruchi'spoet should work on getting him fast.
ReplyDeleteView it all from afar in a distant manner and it will get easier...All the best
ReplyDeleteLovely, the fears are expressed subtly and beautifully.
ReplyDeletenice poem..
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Lovely thoughts and words , Ruchi:)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment on memories of my Dad.
ReplyDeleteYou write with emotions.
A lot of feelings go into poems and writing, not always an easy thing, . BJ
Hi Ruchi, the depth in your poems is amazing, each line makes a lot of impact,your poetic talent is beautiful, I have enjoyed many of your poems today!
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I read a few poems and loved the lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog as otherwise I would not have known about your blog and the beautiful verses
A lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem..Simple and straight from heart :)
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