Saturday, April 21, 2012

I pray...



I know
You love me

I wish
We could be together

I cry
When I miss you

I regret
For the circumstances

I miss
The days with you

I sigh
When am alone

I dream
For all lives with you

I like
Everything about you

I hope
One day you would be mine

I live
When I see a smile on your face

I think
Always for your wellness

I love
The way we are best friends

I pray
And will always pray for your happiness.

21 comments:

  1. I appreciate
    the way you express your feelings.

    anu

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  2. a very interesting kind of poem...
    you made it in a creative way

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  3. That was true love in all the simplicity!Nicely expressed, Ruchi!

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  4. I reread the poem three times. I loved the flow of the words. But a ques, you know he likes you and you like him, so where the problem?

    Also, I know he is not dead, since you are praying for his wellness.
    Apologies, if my ques is too stupid :-|

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  5. Last line was best, you culminated it in a nice way...

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  6. HI! Visiting you for the first time.

    I really like how the words just connect with each other.
    Following you now. I hope we could exchange links. Here's mine:

    noblessekey.blogspot.com

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  7. lovely poem!
    the line that really struck me was :
    "I dream
    For all lives with you"
    .
    leaves me a bit teary-eyed. :)

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  8. This is so sweet my dear..:) I love your poem,:) I love all the words..:)

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    Check this link to claim it:
    http://noblessekey.blogspot.com/2012/04/spot-light.html

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  10. I COULD NOT AGREE MORE...
    nICE POEM yOU HAVE here Ruchi...

    followed your blog...hope you could visit mine
    mr837.blogspot.com

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  11. Lovely poetry. First time and compelled enough to start following... :)

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  12. Lovely n beautifully expressed....it all happens in love when your love is not with you...keep writing

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