Friday, January 6, 2012

Wait...

He waits for her 
She waits for him
Now both are alone
Feeling the same forlorn

What had let this ?
What they both miss ?

It is the situations
Not the people change
Which let two close hearts
To behave strange 

I know both of them 
Are true souls 
But they have to perform
Their earthy roles

I wish they could
Meet again
With darkness blown away
By Love's rain.



11 comments:

  1. Good piece of thought...

    Honest comments: A bit rework on first stanza is felt....plz don't mind.

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  2. Ah the pain two hearts have to tear themselves away fro 'earthy roles'. This is one, I could feel. How true! Hope the hearts meet again, never to part!

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  3. Beautiful Ruchi...This one is written with nice flow of thoughts, amazing!

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  4. awesome poem....very romantic words to express love....
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  5. Lovely flow of words and expression , Ruchi!

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  6. Felt real .... many of us have probably had this experience, these thought, and you put them so well...

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