Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Bathing...


I was scared
And alone
I was silent
And fearful

I was waiting
And trembling
I was cold
And thoughtless

Life was meandering
And I was lost
I need something
Which can calm

 It was raining
And I was bathing
As a crying ally of sky
Because I know  the pain of loneliness.



15 comments:

  1. The rain can be so calming when you feel yourself alone. What a vivid and tender write!

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  2. I wanted to reach out for that young one.

    It is pitiful and not comforting to think about all the homeless street kids who have to bathe in the rain. We can pray no and then for them, that they will somehow be rescued and be able to have a chance for better times in this world.
    ..

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  3. yes, loneliness is something very painful for any human....
    well penned thoughts Ruchi.

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  4. How we yearn to be connected and cared for!

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  5. Sensitive and full of emotions !!!

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  6. There is no more loneliness. Rain is trying her best to give her company. Lovely Poem Ruchi. Loved it.

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  7. Ah- the pain of lonliness- I think we have all "bathed" in it at one time or another. Nicely written and I really enjoyed the image.

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  8. Awwww. You captured that lonliness only as someone could that has been there in the rain.

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  9. Ruchi,

    Only one who has felt loneliness knows how it hurts. Very well told.

    Take care

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  10. lovely words ruchi...
    you create a spell through your words... its a wonder how u intertwine them...

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  11. Beautifully written and emotional.

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