I entered his room and called him up
To come outside, It’s raining here
But to him, nothing matters much
And rain was a fear
He was hiding himself
Alone in the room
With a decrepit heart
As just had gone through doom
He was touching and reading
Some letters again and again
Around him, I had seen
On his left hand
I came out, blank from there
Who used to made everyone cheerful
With his chirpy talks and crass
It is what love had returned him
this shall pass too..............
ReplyDeletehelp him to come out of it!!!!!
cheer him up!!
:-)
Sooo sad this has to happen. But it does, over and over again. Ruchi, you have done well in telling it. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading my little micro-fiction stories. My One Single Impression is on my other blog. I invite you to come read it, here:
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Sad and powerful. Excellent write.
ReplyDeleteWhen life stories gets a poetic flow....it creates a unique flow of thoughts.... touchy read
ReplyDeleteif it's a real story, ask your friend to be practical.
ReplyDeleteliked your writing.
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ReplyDeletewhat a scary aftereffects of love.
ReplyDeleteLove has a power to change everything ...
ReplyDeleteWhen it blooms everything seems beautiful but once it make mess you are going to shatter in gloom of pain !
Loved it!
Keep writing :)
Very beautiful poem....Depression captured very naturally in this poem.....Hope he comes out of it soon....:)
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Depression is as formidable as it is dangerous. Powerful poem.
ReplyDeleteTouching.. painting a formidable picture...
ReplyDeleteamazing..intense..wow.. and yes, depressing.. great poem..
ReplyDeleteProfound work but I think there is a typing error, you meant beer...
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I love, love Beautiful lines of a very romantic and painful.
ReplyDeletelove is beautiful, but it can be a trap too.
ReplyDeletea touching piece of work.
so sad but beautifully expressed...
ReplyDeleteThis is so sad.. It does hurt when we are left helpless in times like this..
ReplyDeletelove... the sweetest poison
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