When everything
Was fickling around
The Circumstances were dubious
A promise by me and you
Which was heart felt true
A promise of affection
Which smile with reflection
A promise to be best friends
With no rules and amends
A promise of Trust
A promise of care
बेहतरीन रचना,...
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Never ever adored the word 'Promise' that much... :) beautiful... :) hey btw, I am subscribed to you but did not get an email when you posted this one... My suggestion is to enable email subscription... :)
ReplyDeleteA solid promise. Inspiring words.
ReplyDeletepromises...meant to fulfill not broken ^_^
ReplyDeleteVery sweet - and there is a hint of pain there.. :)
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ReplyDeleteyou have a beautiful site. I love the poetry. I'll be sure to come back and read more.
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Lovely site...
ReplyDeleteYou started the poem on a high note and gently swifted to lighter side. Great one, Ruchi. Flow of emotions is lovely.
ReplyDeleteNo rules, just a promise. Very nicely said, Ruchi.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of a time when our world could run
smoothly and peaceably on a handshake.
Jim's OSI
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The 'stagnant' promise stands out amidst the dubiousness and flickering. And that lends a positive feeling to a word bearing a negative connotation.
ReplyDeleteIn an ideal world, promises are trusted.
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Wonderful, particularly the promise to be best friends without rules and amends.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem!!!
ReplyDeleteThat was a cute poem Ruchi :-)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the read
Keep writing :-)