Saturday, April 21, 2012

I pray...



I know
You love me

I wish
We could be together

I cry
When I miss you

I regret
For the circumstances

I miss
The days with you

I sigh
When am alone

I dream
For all lives with you

I like
Everything about you

I hope
One day you would be mine

I live
When I see a smile on your face

I think
Always for your wellness

I love
The way we are best friends

I pray
And will always pray for your happiness.

Posted by Ruchi Jain at 9:15 PM

20 comments:

  1. Brijendra SinghApril 21, 2012 at 10:01 PM

    Nicely expressed emotions. Congrats !!

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  2. abhiApril 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    Nice!!

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  3. ANULATA RAJ NAIRApril 22, 2012 at 12:45 AM

    I appreciate
    the way you express your feelings.

    anu

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  4. Armored LadyApril 22, 2012 at 2:08 AM

    a very interesting kind of poem...
    you made it in a creative way

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  5. धीरेन्द्र सिंह भदौरिया April 22, 2012 at 4:55 AM

    NICE.....
    !

    MY RECENT POST...काव्यान्जलि ...:गजल...

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  6. Rahul BhatiaApril 23, 2012 at 2:32 AM

    That was true love in all the simplicity!Nicely expressed, Ruchi!

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  7. JennyApril 23, 2012 at 6:03 AM

    I reread the poem three times. I loved the flow of the words. But a ques, you know he likes you and you like him, so where the problem?

    Also, I know he is not dead, since you are praying for his wellness.
    Apologies, if my ques is too stupid :-|

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  8. Saru SinghalApril 24, 2012 at 9:02 AM

    Last line was best, you culminated it in a nice way...

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  9. Prasoon KhareApril 24, 2012 at 5:53 PM

    Nice poem.... Liked it :)

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  10. Noblesse KeyApril 25, 2012 at 1:15 AM

    HI! Visiting you for the first time.

    I really like how the words just connect with each other.
    Following you now. I hope we could exchange links. Here's mine:

    noblessekey.blogspot.com

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  11. AnonymousApril 25, 2012 at 1:21 AM

    lovely poem

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  12. Harshita SrivastavaApril 25, 2012 at 4:32 AM

    beautifully penned down:)

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  13. dsnake1April 25, 2012 at 5:00 AM

    lovely poem!
    the line that really struck me was :
    "I dream
    For all lives with you"    .
    leaves me a bit teary-eyed. :)

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  14. SagittarianApril 25, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    This is so sweet my dear..:) I love your poem,:) I love all the words..:)

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  15. Noblesse KeyApril 25, 2012 at 3:11 PM

    Congratulations!!! You won the "Tantalizing Blogger Award"
    Check this link to claim it:
    http://noblessekey.blogspot.com/2012/04/spot-light.html

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  16. Albert Einstein☺April 25, 2012 at 5:14 PM

    I COULD NOT AGREE MORE...
    nICE POEM yOU HAVE here Ruchi...

    followed your blog...hope you could visit mine
    mr837.blogspot.com

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  17. AnonymousApril 25, 2012 at 11:40 PM

    Lovely poetry. First time and compelled enough to start following... :)

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  18. Akshay Kumar GApril 27, 2012 at 9:20 AM

    Beautifully expressed emotions :)

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  19. MithlashApril 29, 2012 at 4:03 AM

    Lovely n beautifully expressed....it all happens in love when your love is not with you...keep writing

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  20. SimranMay 5, 2012 at 8:46 AM

    Lovely once again :-)

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