Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Space...





                      




                      Was yours earlier
                      My Breath, Heart and Soul
                      Space now alone.





Posted by Ruchi Jain at 9:46 PM

11 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 12:35 AM

    loved the emotions behind this..

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  2. anthonynorthDecember 8, 2011 at 12:45 AM

    So very poignant. Lovely.

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  3. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 7:06 AM

    I can feel the deep emotion behind these words. Beautifully said. ~Olive Tree. http://peaceroad.wordpress.com/2011/12/08/this-space/

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  4. Susie ClevengerDecember 8, 2011 at 1:19 PM

    I feel the heartbreak in this..sad but beautifully stated

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  5. Prakash JainDecember 8, 2011 at 7:56 PM

    Pain is Felt...Hope the loneliness would convert with a fresh discovery....k.sera.sera

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  6. Saru SinghalDecember 8, 2011 at 8:35 PM

    Ouch, it's so painful. Beautifully expressed though:)

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  7. Priyanka BhowmickDecember 9, 2011 at 7:11 AM

    hope it get filled again with the love you deserve. nicely done.

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  8. Cassiopeia RisesDecember 9, 2011 at 10:28 AM

    Loved the emotions of this Haiku. Very moving.


    Melanie

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  9. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonDecember 16, 2011 at 7:29 PM

    powerful Haiku, wow.

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  10. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonDecember 16, 2011 at 7:30 PM

    invite you to join poets rally week 58 today, a random poem will do.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

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  11. AnandDecember 21, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    lovely and painful.. :)

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