Sunday, December 11, 2011

Covertly...



Appears then hide
The twinkling stars feel shy
Reasonably gazing earth

Somebody is there
An eye on their love
Continuous watching mystery

Why they so apart
Still earth and sky parallel
Watching covertly another.



Posted by Ruchi Jain at 5:52 AM

13 comments:

  1. GraceDecember 11, 2011 at 6:12 AM

    I love this cosmic covert set...such an enchanting sight to see from the Earth ~

    Happy day ~

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  2. Prakash JainDecember 11, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    Nature's beauty is beyond imagination, words and expression...unsolved mystery forever...

    Nice lines Ruchi....

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 11, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    Wow this is an awesome haiku, so much energy and spirituality in these nice set of haiku.

    Thank you for sharing this with the world.

    Namaste

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  4. AnonymousDecember 11, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    Very nice!

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  5. Ramesh SoodDecember 13, 2011 at 1:25 AM

    I liked the way you have weaved it.. well done..
    Came through haiku heights.. do visit..

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  6. AnonymousDecember 13, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    wonderful words woven together. ~Olive Tree http://peaceroad.wordpress.com/2011/12/13/that-one-look/

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  7. MithlashDecember 14, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    short & crisp. liked it.

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  8. AnonymousDecember 17, 2011 at 10:06 AM

    i like the first the best

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  9. Megha SarinDecember 20, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    Awww..Love the way you have made use of words.

    Love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  10. Prime AqueDecember 22, 2011 at 5:53 AM

    Creative, I love this one my friend :)

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  11. AnonymousDecember 22, 2011 at 10:39 PM

    sparkling imagery.

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  12. AnonymousDecember 22, 2011 at 10:39 PM

    Excellent!
    Happy Holidays….
    I know you write stunning Haiku, welcome sharing with us,
    1 to 3 or more are welcome.
    no theme.
    Hope to see you in,
    Smiles!

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  13. UnknownDecember 23, 2011 at 7:38 AM

    oh great you write poetry..i myself write poetry and love reading poetry as well....very well written..
    http://alkanarula.blogspot.com

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