Saturday, December 24, 2011

Drive...



She is alone
She is freezed
Her eyes expressing well
That she is feeling hell

Unable to accept
That she lost all
All of a sudden
For whom once she fall

Feeling so abject
Gazing plain wall 
Waiting all while
To receive his call 

Nobody can understand 
What she is going through
She is thinking all day
About the memories she accrue

Please come her love 
Make her feel alive
Forget the blues in between
Again start the love's drive. 


10 comments:

  1. A post on desolation on Christmas? Very well written Ruchi..

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  2. Hope he will return soooon!

    Touching words.

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  3. Beautiful writing Ruchi! Somewhat sad for Christmas. Sincerely hope he'll be appearing soon.

    Hank

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  4. Again start the love's drive......Aamen!

    Beautiful....

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  5. It's so beautiful that I can't help myself but share it on facebook. Connecting as it is. :)

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  6. beautiful soulful lines Ruchi,
    seems like written straight from the heart,
    deep,profound,mesmerizing thoughts..keep writing,
    you seem a budding poet in making,would love to read more from you,Thanks for introducing yourself on my blog and leaving the lovely comment,
    keep sharing,stay connected..following you to keep track,
    Rohit

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  7. I liked the last line in particular.
    May be return soon.

    After autumn , comes spring:)

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