Saturday, October 8, 2011

Impossible Love...






Will vanish by your touch
Yet will die out
Happily with eternal Impossible love.


                                                 





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Posted by Ruchi Jain at 8:59 AM

17 comments:

  1. Cassiopeia RisesOctober 9, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    Nice poem but should be either 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 to be a Haiku.

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  2. Andy SewinaOctober 9, 2011 at 3:17 PM

    Cool picture, words too true, a balloon and a cactus, you're right it's an impossible love!

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  3. Ruchi JainOctober 10, 2011 at 8:18 AM

    SweetTalkingGuy , thankss

    Cassiopeia Rises, sure, i will try, thankss for your valuable suggestion.

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  4. AmityOctober 10, 2011 at 11:18 PM

    Ruchi...beautiful thoughts...i wish to think aloud, opposite poles attract...the balloon and the cactus can never be near each other...will love be possible?

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  5. Tarang SinhaOctober 11, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    This is unique!:)

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  6. NankaOctober 13, 2011 at 4:34 AM

    Just like a Punch and Judy show!! Ruchi you have to count in syllables the three lines, details are on the Haiku Heights page.

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  7. AnonymousOctober 13, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    Some of the seemingly impossible loves make the strongest ... although not common!

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  8. Susie ClevengerOctober 13, 2011 at 7:35 AM

    Impossible love still holds the heart...the image perfect for you poem..

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  9. HazelOctober 13, 2011 at 8:22 PM

    Impossible indeed. Oh those thorns would hurt.

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  10. Ruchi JainOctober 14, 2011 at 7:32 AM

    @Cassiopeia Rises
    Ya sure, this is my first attempt to Haiku,, will learn it..Thnkss..

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  11. Ruchi JainOctober 14, 2011 at 7:34 AM

    @Amity
    Love is Far apart from touch,, its and eternal feeling, so natural and so true..

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  12. Ruchi JainOctober 14, 2011 at 7:34 AM

    @Tarang Sinha
    Thnkss Tarang...

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  13. Ruchi JainOctober 14, 2011 at 7:35 AM

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  14. Ruchi JainOctober 14, 2011 at 7:37 AM

    @Nanka
    Thankss Mam , will learn it..

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  15. Ruchi JainOctober 14, 2011 at 7:38 AM

    @beccagivens
    Very true..

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  16. Ruchi JainOctober 14, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    @Susie Clevenger
    Yes , true, many thanks

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  17. GraceOctober 16, 2011 at 5:32 PM

    sweet but true...

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