I so agree with that last line. nice one.
Sounds like a magic sponge!Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could simply squeeze hatred out?Well said!
well said :)
sweet.
Squeezing out hatred is a worthwhile enterprise.Sponging up the river
sponges have a lot of voids to fill. interesting conceptmy try at a spong senryu http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/28/drooling-dog-senryu/
Nice! I love your last line, very poignant. Sounds simple, but it's actually very deep in meaning. Great work. Thanks for stopping by to mine too :)
love this, apt piece.http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/11/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.htmlsubmit a Haiku or a free verse to poets rally today, have fun making poetic friends, while enjoying exposing your talent to wider audiences.cheers.love your charming poetry here, keep it up.Hope to see you share.xoxox
I so agree with that last line. nice one.
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ReplyDeleteWouldn't it be wonderful if we could simply squeeze hatred out?
Well said!
well said :)
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ReplyDeleteSqueezing out hatred is a worthwhile enterprise.
ReplyDeleteSponging up the river
sponges have a lot of voids to fill. interesting concept
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Nice! I love your last line, very poignant. Sounds simple, but it's actually very deep in meaning. Great work. Thanks for stopping by to mine too :)
ReplyDeletelove this,
ReplyDeleteapt piece.
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/11/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html
submit a Haiku or a free verse to poets rally today, have fun making poetic friends, while enjoying exposing your talent to wider audiences.
cheers.
love your charming poetry here, keep it up.
Hope to see you share.
xoxox