Monday, October 17, 2011

Vibrant...



















Kindling yellow sphere
Roaming between dawn and dusk
Dancer so vibrant.

Posted by Ruchi Jain at 3:36 AM

12 comments:

  1. Dave KingOctober 17, 2011 at 4:04 AM

    I like this very much. Sinewy and spare.

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 17, 2011 at 6:30 AM

    Nice one. The lightness of this haiku brings tears of joy in my eyes. Thank you so much.

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  3. dsnake1October 17, 2011 at 8:36 AM

    yes, a vibrant dancer indeed, the sun. i like the idea. :)

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  4. The Write GirlOctober 17, 2011 at 7:14 PM

    Such a lovely haiku. Enjoyed reading!

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  5. AnonymousOctober 18, 2011 at 5:23 AM

    The sky is a perfect dance floor--I like this one :)

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  6. AnonymousOctober 18, 2011 at 8:21 AM

    shining beauty.. :)

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  7. Saru SinghalOctober 18, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    11 beautiful words:)

    Saru

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  8. ShaunaOctober 18, 2011 at 8:55 PM

    the sun does dance at that particular time
    of day. great haiku.

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  9. Cassiopeia RisesOctober 19, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    Wonderful Haiku. Beautiful words fit Haiku.



    Melanie

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 19, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    The sun as a dancer! Yes!!!!!!!

    One Take on Vibrant

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  11. knot2shareOctober 20, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    Lovely!...and you say that you are new to Haiku? I love the idea of Sun being a dancer.

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  12. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    sun dancing is a great line,
    well done,

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