Friday, October 28, 2011

Power...





I felt betrayed 
And was left alone 
In the darkness of
This glittering world

I was scared
And lost myself
Searching the answer of 
This bizarre life's puzzle

Now, I need something
Something that is called power 
Power to free myself
Power to ponder

Power to breathe strong
Power to move ahead
And the most important
Power to bring back me in myself.





Posted by Ruchi Jain at 10:59 PM

23 comments:

  1. Tarang SinhaOctober 28, 2011 at 11:44 PM

    Powerful and positive piece of writing!:)

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  2. NankaOctober 29, 2011 at 9:25 AM

    Much power in the write and hope you succeed!!

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  3. Rakesh KumarOctober 29, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    Very nice.
    I liked your lovely poem.
    Ruchi,if you like Hindi blogs,
    pl.visit mine also,

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  4. SimranOctober 29, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    Powerful words indeed!

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  5. Judith C EvansOctober 29, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    The last line says it all. A well-written, empowering poem!

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  6. A Word In My HeadOctober 29, 2011 at 11:01 PM

    i really like your poem, it reflects your optimism

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  7. Saru SinghalOctober 30, 2011 at 8:12 AM

    Awesome work in few words. Last paragraph is beautiful.

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  8. sHoNaOctober 30, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    Hi Ruchi,
    amazing & powerful post .rocking one
    words & theme perfectly put together.
    Although it was pretty balmy on Sunday - made even better by ur post.
    niceone.

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  9. Susie ClevengerOctober 30, 2011 at 8:31 PM

    This poem touches me so much...My girls are going through a rough period in their lives...this speaks for them

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  10. AnonymousOctober 31, 2011 at 1:54 AM

    Thats amazing. "The Me in myself" is the most difficult to find. I am in its search too. So I guess we are on the same trail. :)

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  11. Rahul BhatiaOctober 31, 2011 at 2:46 AM

    A power packed expression! Very well written...

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  12. Prakash JainOctober 31, 2011 at 5:10 AM

    Superb...

    www.poeticprakash.com

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  13. AnonymousOctober 31, 2011 at 6:47 AM

    Powerful words. Building a perfect aura of the theme.
    Loved it!

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  14. RachanaOctober 31, 2011 at 7:01 AM

    Power to breathe strong
    Power to move ahead
    And the most important
    Power to bring back me in myself.
    nice and amazing
    rachana

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  15. Kailash SharmaOctober 31, 2011 at 7:18 AM

    And the most important
    Power to bring back me in myself.

    ....very beautiful and effective expression..

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  16. The PoetOctober 31, 2011 at 3:51 PM

    Hello.
    Powerful poem
    The imagery works too.
    I especially liked your ending.

    Nicely done!
    Thanks for sharing & for your visit. I appreciate it.

    The Beautiful Winds Of India

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  17. UrmiOctober 31, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and for your lovely comment.
    I appreciate for your wonderful poem. Very beautifully written.

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  18. ChristineNovember 1, 2011 at 8:45 AM

    the picture shows the power, take a deep breath, and live, powerful poem here

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  19. PblacksawNovember 1, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    love the poem.. have a wonderful day!

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  20. PratibhaNovember 1, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    may the power be yours ..
    Nice post !!

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  21. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceNovember 2, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Glad that you find power in the end.
    :)

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  22. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton November 5, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    join poets rally week 55 today.

    ;)

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  23. intellectual discussionsNovember 27, 2011 at 11:16 AM

    ruchi, tis a gud xperience..

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