Its wanting or greed
Why I am still in prisonOf your thoughts
Even you had let me freed
You will never gonna speak
That you want me back
But you don’t know that
These thoughts letting me weak
I wanna come out
I want to detach now
But something had
Bounded me near about
At least you could have told
The way you feel
I wanna know about
The wanting still unfold.
"I wanna come out
ReplyDeleteI want to detach now
But something had
Bounded me near about"
Brilliant lines!
Typo- could have* told!
ReplyDeleteVery Nice.
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It was almost like you wanted to say so much but these words weren't enough to contain the emotions.
ReplyDeleteNicely done :)
Ruchi,
ReplyDeleteRead 4 poems now. MAIN AUR WOH is penned so beautifully. It is a fact that animals give so much of love without any expectations. If one moves on for whatever reasons be, it is better to share that with partner one is leaving behind.
Take care
beautiful words!!
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ReplyDeleteloved it...:)
ReplyDeleteSuperb thoughts and words....looking for more :-)
ReplyDeleteAt least you could have told
ReplyDeleteThe way you feel
I wanna know about
The wanting still unfold.
The desire to know...........
Beautiful poem.
Beautiful :) :)
ReplyDeleteRuchi you are getting better day by day!
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