True, every child is special!!I could count 16 syllables here?, sorry if I am wrong..
Less than seventeen is fine Jaideep....but here these are seventeen..
Like they say, looks don't matter :) purity of thought and heart is the most essential character that is needed.I count 18 syllables..Or-di-na-ry faced kidAs eve-ry child is spe-cialI al-so look cuteIt can be remedied by changing the "also" to "too". :)
every child is cute,,,,,,.MY RESENT POST,,,,,काव्यान्जलि ...: स्वागत गीत,,,,,
No child can be ordinary! :)Painting heart with hope
:)Agreed with Miss Pranita.Regards
Every child is special ~
light-hearted with a great message.....cute photo, too
Children fill the life with such innocence no matter who ever they are... they can be naughty chirpy sober or whatsoever but definitely not ordinary... every child is the apple of eyes for their parents :):):)
This is your first Haiku if I am not wrong. BTW, Leo can explain and judge this better but I loved the thought behind it.
Very beautiful haiku....with sweet message!
Children, tender innocent and beautiful always.
Aww so cute <3We should never lose a kid in us <3lovehttp://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com
nice one .. lovely pic alsoordinary view
Yes, every child is special in his/her own sweet way :-)
Few words! So meaningful!! A Sukta or call haiku or whatever!! (A lesson for parents and teachers: Never Compare)
True, every child is special!!
ReplyDeleteI could count 16 syllables here?, sorry if I am wrong..
Less than seventeen is fine Jaideep....but here these are seventeen..
DeleteLike they say, looks don't matter :) purity of thought and heart is the most essential character that is needed.
DeleteI count 18 syllables..
Or-di-na-ry faced kid
As eve-ry child is spe-cial
I al-so look cute
It can be remedied by changing the "also" to "too". :)
every child is cute,,,,,,.
ReplyDeleteMY RESENT POST,,,,,काव्यान्जलि ...: स्वागत गीत,,,,,
No child can be ordinary! :)
ReplyDeletePainting heart with hope
:)
ReplyDeleteAgreed with Miss Pranita.
Regards
Every child is special ~
ReplyDeletelight-hearted with a great message.....cute photo, too
ReplyDeleteChildren fill the life with such innocence no matter who ever they are... they can be naughty chirpy sober or whatsoever but definitely not ordinary... every child is the apple of eyes for their parents :):):)
ReplyDeleteThis is your first Haiku if I am not wrong. BTW, Leo can explain and judge this better but I loved the thought behind it.
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful haiku....with sweet message!
ReplyDeleteChildren, tender innocent and beautiful always.
ReplyDeleteAww so cute <3
ReplyDeleteWe should never lose a kid in us <3
love
http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com
nice one ..
ReplyDeletelovely pic also
ordinary view
Yes, every child is special in his/her own sweet way :-)
ReplyDeleteFew words! So meaningful!! A Sukta or call haiku or whatever!!
ReplyDelete(A lesson for parents and teachers: Never Compare)