I was scared
And alone
I was silent
And fearful
I was waiting And trembling
I was cold
And thoughtless
Life was meandering
And I was lost
I need something
Which can calm
It was raining
And I was bathing
As a crying ally of sky
Because I know the pain of loneliness.
The rain can be so calming when you feel yourself alone. What a vivid and tender write!
ReplyDeleteI wanted to reach out for that young one.
ReplyDeleteIt is pitiful and not comforting to think about all the homeless street kids who have to bathe in the rain. We can pray no and then for them, that they will somehow be rescued and be able to have a chance for better times in this world.
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yes, loneliness is something very painful for any human....
ReplyDeletewell penned thoughts Ruchi.
How we yearn to be connected and cared for!
ReplyDeleteSo touching line...!
ReplyDeleteSensitive and full of emotions !!!
ReplyDeleteThere is no more loneliness. Rain is trying her best to give her company. Lovely Poem Ruchi. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteAh- the pain of lonliness- I think we have all "bathed" in it at one time or another. Nicely written and I really enjoyed the image.
ReplyDeleteawesome ! Heart touching.
ReplyDeleteawesome ! Heart touching.
ReplyDeleteAwwww. You captured that lonliness only as someone could that has been there in the rain.
ReplyDeleteRuchi,
ReplyDeleteOnly one who has felt loneliness knows how it hurts. Very well told.
Take care
lovely words ruchi...
ReplyDeleteyou create a spell through your words... its a wonder how u intertwine them...
Beautifully written and emotional.
ReplyDeletevery evocative! wonderful writing.
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