Sunday, July 8, 2012

Balloon...


I want to fly
Fly high like balloon
Being light and colorful
Want to move along sky

Am not a bird
With wings and feathers
And don’t wanna have something
Which when broken, will leave me with tears

Being a living being
I have to care about emotions
Even being kind, sometimes it hurts
So, why to have a messy heart

Will be ok to be a balloon
So if anybody will hurt
Only air will come out
Leaving no tears and pain inside.


Posted by Ruchi Jain at 9:59 PM

18 comments:

  1. Yashwant R. B. MathurJuly 8, 2012 at 10:46 PM

    Will be ok to be a balloon
    So if anybody will hurt
    Only air will come out
    Leaving no tears and pain inside.

    beautiful lines.


    Regards

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  2. anthonynorthJuly 9, 2012 at 12:38 AM

    A beautiful wish.

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  3. Harshad MehtaJuly 9, 2012 at 4:51 AM

    I want to fly.....

    Starts with a wonderful dream of a child and soon gets grounded by realities as an adult will see.

    Very interesting piece.

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  4. Amrit SinhaJuly 9, 2012 at 8:22 AM

    Loved the last paragraph... awesome emotions in a balloon !!!

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  5. IrfanuddinJuly 9, 2012 at 9:18 AM

    Fly like baloon..so thoughtful..... :)

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  6. JimJuly 9, 2012 at 10:27 AM

    As our bubbles are burst, so are the balloons in our life.
    Very nicely written, Ruchi, you have me thinking.
    Thank you, :)
    ..

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    1. JimJuly 9, 2012 at 10:29 AM

      Got to thinking. Those burst 'balloons' in our lives leave more residue than do the bubbles.
      Do we pick them and throw away up, cover them up, or leave them lay as open polution?
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  7. JackJuly 10, 2012 at 6:40 AM

    Ruchi,

    Shows how compassionate you are.

    Take care

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  8. JennyJuly 11, 2012 at 6:55 AM

    Ahh I wish I could just fly away like that. Wonderfully written!

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  9. Writefully YoursJuly 11, 2012 at 6:58 PM

    the thought of being a balloon and not a bird is beautiful! good work :)

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  10. Yashwant R. B. MathurJuly 11, 2012 at 11:10 PM

    कल 13/07/2012 को आपकी यह बेहतरीन पोस्ट http://nayi-purani-halchal.blogspot.in पर लिंक की जा रही हैं.आपके सुझावों का स्वागत है .
    धन्यवाद!

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  11. Rahul BhatiaJuly 12, 2012 at 10:35 PM

    Nice one Ruchi:)Why have a messy heart- true:)

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  12. abhiJuly 13, 2012 at 12:31 AM

    Beautiful wish :)

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  13. SandyCarlsonJuly 13, 2012 at 7:13 PM

    We seek to protect ourselves--even if we know we can't. Great poem.

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  14. Saru SinghalJuly 14, 2012 at 10:30 AM

    I like the last paragraph, it is so painful and moving!

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  15. UnknownJuly 15, 2012 at 9:25 PM

    Moving indeed .....a very emotional wish so delicately beautifully expressed
    Regards !! ..

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  16. muthuNovember 4, 2012 at 11:23 PM

    Well, I also have this fantasy about flying but I would like to fly like sea gull rather than like a balloon. but anyways a good one. :)

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  17. muthuNovember 4, 2012 at 11:24 PM

    nice and interesting blog. Following you!!

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