He waits for her
She waits for him
Now both are alone
Feeling the same forlorn
Now both are alone
Feeling the same forlorn
What had let this ?
What they both miss ?
It is the situations
Not the people change
Which let two close hearts
To behave strange
I know both of them
Are true souls
But they have to perform
Their earthy roles
I wish they could
Meet again
With darkness blown away
By Love's rain.
Very Nice!
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Good piece of thought...
ReplyDeleteHonest comments: A bit rework on first stanza is felt....plz don't mind.
Ah the pain two hearts have to tear themselves away fro 'earthy roles'. This is one, I could feel. How true! Hope the hearts meet again, never to part!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Ruchi...This one is written with nice flow of thoughts, amazing!
ReplyDeleteheartfelt lines:)
ReplyDeletegood expression.
ReplyDeleteawesome poem....very romantic words to express love....
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Lovely flow of words and expression , Ruchi!
ReplyDeletetrue expressions....!!!:):)
ReplyDeleteSuperb lines!
ReplyDeleteFelt real .... many of us have probably had this experience, these thought, and you put them so well...
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