tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post1636011742382513959..comments2024-02-27T04:05:39.978-08:00Comments on Ruchi's Chunk: Alive...2Ruchi Jainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13565145854196414405noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-31321811237264510112012-02-29T06:20:33.444-08:002012-02-29T06:20:33.444-08:00SADNESS....SADNESS....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-7539192467628368012012-02-24T19:17:49.496-08:002012-02-24T19:17:49.496-08:00I like that last verse...indeed it is all that rem...I like that last verse...indeed it is all that remains ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-25934828059557529242012-02-24T09:28:46.322-08:002012-02-24T09:28:46.322-08:00Very nice poem ... I love how you build this one t...Very nice poem ... I love how you build this one to the climax. A climax I hadn't expected, but ... wow what a climax!<br />Thank you so much for sharing this.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-86618361724759738902012-02-23T18:13:33.317-08:002012-02-23T18:13:33.317-08:00lovely and sad... nice work:)lovely and sad... nice work:)Nehahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12895336357128654041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-4435589640206524582012-02-23T06:37:13.322-08:002012-02-23T06:37:13.322-08:00lovely imagery..
:)lovely imagery..<br /><br /><br />:)Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-85715753260671494442012-02-22T23:39:27.561-08:002012-02-22T23:39:27.561-08:00So touching....:-)So touching....:-)JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-27918497462509178362012-02-22T22:16:31.363-08:002012-02-22T22:16:31.363-08:00what a refreshing poem of love... a breath of fres...what a refreshing poem of love... a breath of fresh air this beautiful read was for me! <br /><br />~L<br />www.untitledmoments.com~Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00531527684783928241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-31095071577997117862012-02-22T15:34:49.620-08:002012-02-22T15:34:49.620-08:00Hello.
When everything around is is withering and ...Hello.<br />When everything around is is withering and dying, love will always remain eternal, everlasting...because it cannot die at the doorsteps of death.<br />Sad outcome, but nicely penned!<br />Thanks for sharing & visiting.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2012/02/flower-in-my-mirror.html" rel="nofollow">A Flower In My Mirror</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-47839333245159810732012-02-21T18:37:36.211-08:002012-02-21T18:37:36.211-08:00Love endures, to be sure. Well said and beautiful...Love endures, to be sure. Well said and beautifully presented.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-65192976881187161682012-02-21T14:35:26.722-08:002012-02-21T14:35:26.722-08:00nice...your words have a wonderful flow to them......nice...your words have a wonderful flow to them...and love that in the end love is what is left because love certainly endures....smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-40927918947694021112012-02-21T11:47:53.097-08:002012-02-21T11:47:53.097-08:00Beautiful. Simpler words conveying deeper meaning....Beautiful. Simpler words conveying deeper meaning. :)Akshay Kumar Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17254072109005538953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-80989615554530808852012-02-21T00:37:26.053-08:002012-02-21T00:37:26.053-08:00Beautiful...But I didn't like the climax of th...Beautiful...But I didn't like the climax of the poem...To become immortal in love people dont need to commit suicide...In my opinion positive outlook is most important thing in love....<br /><br />Liked the flow of the word and here you played nicely with words and it is making this poem more appealing and beautiful..<br /><br />Keep writing:)Mithlashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17527724445074472020noreply@blogger.com