tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post1174854795698770418..comments2024-02-27T04:05:39.978-08:00Comments on Ruchi's Chunk: उड़ जा पंछी...Ruchi Jainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13565145854196414405noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-35243953994284891032012-06-21T00:23:00.830-07:002012-06-21T00:23:00.830-07:00@Ruchi - It's a gr88 excitement to read ur pie...@Ruchi - It's a gr88 excitement to read ur pieces...they look like mine..and i loved the way u conclude your poems with hope....and hope is the best ingredient for life..Hemanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01650140034471289700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-42194671132052849052012-02-16T01:44:50.777-08:002012-02-16T01:44:50.777-08:00WAH ......SUNDAR RACHANA ...BADHAI RUCHI JI.WAH ......SUNDAR RACHANA ...BADHAI RUCHI JI.Naveen Mani Tripathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12695495499891742635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-82774936085203570622012-01-01T11:26:15.540-08:002012-01-01T11:26:15.540-08:00कोई रंग भरेगा तेरे सपनों में,
रास्ते भी नये मिल ज...कोई रंग भरेगा तेरे सपनों में,<br />रास्ते भी नये मिल जायेंगे।<br />सुन्दर भाव,ख्याल भी अच्छे।<br />नये वर्ष की हार्दिक शुभकामनायें......dinesh aggarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216221541613478194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-62437857242545886902011-12-26T09:38:15.809-08:002011-12-26T09:38:15.809-08:00bahut gehre panktiya,soch se bhare hue,
you write ...bahut gehre panktiya,soch se bhare hue,<br />you write so well in hindi too..so soothing to readRohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/https://www.blogger.com/profile/00332832229217846976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-27060136729473152602011-12-25T09:08:58.951-08:002011-12-25T09:08:58.951-08:00Beautiful. I love last line.Beautiful. I love last line.Harshad Mehtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-57937172035478224482011-12-25T00:12:28.855-08:002011-12-25T00:12:28.855-08:00dard aur chatpataht ...apne vatan e ashma ko pane ...dard aur chatpataht ...apne vatan e ashma ko pane ki .....bahut hi sundar ...kalpana ki parakastha par ki gayi kalpanaASHOK BIRLAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01944953865988099586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-81293307352857576252011-12-24T22:04:32.671-08:002011-12-24T22:04:32.671-08:00उड़ जा रे छोटे से पंछी
शायद दिन फिर पलट जायेंगे
क...उड़ जा रे छोटे से पंछी <br />शायद दिन फिर पलट जायेंगे<br />कोई रंग भरेगा तेरे सपनो मे <br />रास्ते भी नए मिल जायेंगे |<br />सुन्दर भाव.... अच्छी रचना...<br /><br />मेरी क्रिसमस.S.M.HABIB (Sanjay Mishra 'Habib')https://www.blogger.com/profile/10992209593666997359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-33845017141566066912011-12-24T17:01:02.571-08:002011-12-24T17:01:02.571-08:00बहुत सुन्दर भावबहुत सुन्दर भावVandana Ramasinghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01400483506434772550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-7836909437931654662011-12-24T09:38:52.510-08:002011-12-24T09:38:52.510-08:00उड़ जा रे छोटे से पंछी
शायद दिन फिर पलट जायेंगे
क...उड़ जा रे छोटे से पंछी <br />शायद दिन फिर पलट जायेंगे<br />कोई रंग भरेगा तेरे सपनो मे <br />रास्ते भी नए मिल जायेंगे |<br /><br /><br />बहुत अच्छी कविता ....बी.एस.गुर्जरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15318419352006612384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-47536556043929316062011-12-24T09:17:42.909-08:002011-12-24T09:17:42.909-08:00Very well crafted :)
I like reading hindi poetry c...Very well crafted :)<br />I like reading hindi poetry cause I myself suck at the language :P<br /><br />Thank you for dropping by :)PhilO♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/02754122680372548153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-18480146648571970242011-12-24T00:33:05.265-08:002011-12-24T00:33:05.265-08:00बहुत अच्छा लगा आपका ब्लॉग और यह रचना भी!
सादर
--...बहुत अच्छा लगा आपका ब्लॉग और यह रचना भी!<br /><br />सादर <br />----<br /><a href="http://jomeramankahe.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"> जो मेरा मन कहे </a> पर आपका स्वागत हैYashwant R. B. Mathurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06997216769306922306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-33177359563671390362011-12-23T19:46:41.519-08:002011-12-23T19:46:41.519-08:00bahut hi gahri rachnabahut hi gahri rachnaरश्मि प्रभा...https://www.blogger.com/profile/14755956306255938813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-6445867948730749852011-12-23T06:11:30.562-08:002011-12-23T06:11:30.562-08:00Hindi padh ke dil ko bahut sukoon milta hai, jaane...Hindi padh ke dil ko bahut sukoon milta hai, jaane kyo :)<br />I especially liked the lines **उड़ जा रे छोटे से पंछी <br />शायद दिन फिर पलट जायेंगे<br />कोई रंग भरेगा तेरे सपनो मे <br />रास्ते भी नए मिल जायेंगे<br /><br />Bahut khoob :)Cяystalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15646503511383569687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-63218865918042928682011-12-23T05:51:17.713-08:002011-12-23T05:51:17.713-08:00सुंदर रचना!सुंदर रचना!Rahul Bhatiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690287853990880735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-4742884756110385612011-12-23T05:31:21.894-08:002011-12-23T05:31:21.894-08:00अपने कमेंट्स बॉक्स से वर्डवेरीफिकेसन हटा ले कमेंट्...अपने कमेंट्स बॉक्स से वर्डवेरीफिकेसन हटा ले कमेंट्स करने में परेशानी <br />और समय लगता है,......धीरेन्द्र सिंह भदौरिया https://www.blogger.com/profile/09047336871751054497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-58151172404275144432011-12-23T05:26:39.261-08:002011-12-23T05:26:39.261-08:00रुची जी,..सुंदर अहसासों का रंग लिये प्यारी रचना,.....रुची जी,..सुंदर अहसासों का रंग लिये प्यारी रचना,....अच्छी पोस्ट <br /><br />मेरे पोस्ट के लिए <a href="http://dheerendra11.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"> "काव्यान्जलि" </a> मे click करे <br />पोस्ट पर आने के लिए आभार,....धीरेन्द्र सिंह भदौरिया https://www.blogger.com/profile/09047336871751054497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-67579095337582146422011-12-22T01:14:44.010-08:002011-12-22T01:14:44.010-08:00Very nice. Very touching.Very nice. Very touching.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-27557919465133558162011-12-21T21:11:58.688-08:002011-12-21T21:11:58.688-08:00Hamesha ki tarah ....... Awesome....:PHamesha ki tarah ....... Awesome....:PManish kharehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05090011556603926233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3231598665778512416.post-44883483177625057212011-12-21T19:23:07.902-08:002011-12-21T19:23:07.902-08:00Profound and whats best about it Ruchi is that you...Profound and whats best about it Ruchi is that you wrote it in simple words. I don't like high sounding poems. <br /><br />Great, keep on writing:)Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.com